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Exodus

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Show me the shadow where true meaning lies
So much more dismay in empty eyes

SOO this is a vent from last night.
im all good now.
but yeah
i kinda like this.


im sorry it sucks.
be easy if you critique kay?
ive never done this position and it isnt amazing so dont be harsh OTL

okthatsallenjoy.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I am not sure what you are trying to tell me by looking at the picture or what the words on the wall have to do with the cat/wolf. I also see I need for improvement in anatomy and shading should be used also. Of course you are not the first person who did something like this and there for not such an impact on me. You should work on the background a bit more I admit it is okay. I can not read the words you put on the wall. Over all there is much room for improvement on this piece. It kinda looks as if you threw some ideas together, not much meshing as I would say going on. I mean just doesn't work they piano is it? On the floor and neon music notes on the wall. I am not sure what the cat/wolf is doing either.

I would love to see this when you have improved on it. In no way was I trying to be mean but honest I hope you understand.